This is 30 second animatic
(includes mockup drawing after 14seconds to see timing)
I've been thinking about how to time out my storyline again.
I was going to include front scene and the last scene
after cutting out some middle scene where Larry runs away from the snake.
Tanya said that the running scene is good for transition and would rather cut down the first whole scene and then link it with stewart's story (story3) instead of jin's.
I'm still struggling to time out some middle sequence but I'm getting there.